Comments on: Flash Fiction: Heralded By Iron http://www.nostalgiaforinfinity.com/2009/03/flash-fiction-heralded-by-iron/ Missives on cultural detritus with a slurred punk-rock spin. Tue, 31 Jan 2012 14:52:16 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: » Week O’ Flash Retrospective >>Nostalgia For Infinity: Literature, Gaming, Punk Rock (and all that) http://www.nostalgiaforinfinity.com/2009/03/flash-fiction-heralded-by-iron/comment-page-1/#comment-3777 » Week O’ Flash Retrospective >>Nostalgia For Infinity: Literature, Gaming, Punk Rock (and all that) Sat, 14 Mar 2009 09:01:13 +0000 http://www.nostalgiaforinfinity.com/?p=683#comment-3777 [...] stories are Wanderlust, Heralded By Iron, Punk’s Not Dead and Colours [...] [...] stories are Wanderlust, Heralded By Iron, Punk’s Not Dead and Colours [...]

]]> By: Shaun CG http://www.nostalgiaforinfinity.com/2009/03/flash-fiction-heralded-by-iron/comment-page-1/#comment-3764 Shaun CG Wed, 11 Mar 2009 11:15:20 +0000 http://www.nostalgiaforinfinity.com/?p=683#comment-3764 I'm not sure what you mean by structural? If it's that the piece is not so much a story as a loose description of place/event then I definitely agree, but if it's a reference to the style of writing/something else I'm mighty curious. Thanks very much for reading and commenting, and I'm pleased that some of the prose worked well for you! I’m not sure what you mean by structural? If it’s that the piece is not so much a story as a loose description of place/event then I definitely agree, but if it’s a reference to the style of writing/something else I’m mighty curious.

Thanks very much for reading and commenting, and I’m pleased that some of the prose worked well for you!

]]> By: Justin http://www.nostalgiaforinfinity.com/2009/03/flash-fiction-heralded-by-iron/comment-page-1/#comment-3763 Justin Tue, 10 Mar 2009 23:05:57 +0000 http://www.nostalgiaforinfinity.com/?p=683#comment-3763 <i>Atop one wagon a solitary sapient arachnid manufactures disposable clothing and blankets for the workforce, spinning its own silk and weaving it with delicate forelimbs.</i> As a whole, it seems a bit too structural (not really sure how you could remedy that - more short sentences? Nothing major, anyway...), but there are plenty examples of wonder and genius, as above. Brilliant imagery, and a nice, satisfying close. Atop one wagon a solitary sapient arachnid manufactures disposable clothing and blankets for the workforce, spinning its own silk and weaving it with delicate forelimbs.

As a whole, it seems a bit too structural (not really sure how you could remedy that – more short sentences? Nothing major, anyway…), but there are plenty examples of wonder and genius, as above. Brilliant imagery, and a nice, satisfying close.

]]>