Comments on: F3: Some Kind of Superhero

By: >>Nostalgia For Infinity - TTA Press Advent Calendar

>>Nostalgia For Infinity - TTA Press Advent Calendar — Thu, 17 Dec 2009 16:39:06 +0000

[...] of NFI will have seen ‘Some Kind Of Superhero’ before, but if you haven’t why not give it a read? I can guarantee you will like it more than the shitty, powdery chocolate you get in a [...]

By: Shaun CG

Shaun CG — Sun, 11 Jan 2009 15:20:44 +0000

Thanks for your support and advice, everyone. :)

By: Jetse

Jetse — Sun, 11 Jan 2009 00:40:43 +0000

Promising: some good images and sentences in there. Also, as Gareth said, it needs a good polish.

One particular nitpick: a sky might be like a bathtub of water at daytime, but not at night (unless one bathes in guinness or crude oil).

And now I’m really off to bed…;-)

By: Stuff you should check out « The other side of the river

Stuff you should check out « The other side of the river — Sat, 10 Jan 2009 20:51:12 +0000

[...] For now I’d like to direct your attention to Nostalgia for Infinity and Shaun C. Green’s belated Friday Flash Fiction Some Kind of Superhero. [...]

By: GLP

GLP — Sat, 10 Jan 2009 20:25:04 +0000

As Justin says, a final polish is needed – but apart from that, this is the best thing you have ever written. Outstanding.

By: Justin Pickard

Justin Pickard — Sat, 10 Jan 2009 20:20:51 +0000

Incredible.

There’s still some niggling little structural stuff, but your metaphors & similies are goooood, and the characterisation is understated, utilitarian, and totally spot on. :)